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Post by Janus on Mar 24, 2003 19:26:57 GMT -5
Self-Centered
We think we are good We really think we should
We think we are great Even though we hate
We think we are the best We've been put to the test
We think we are strong Despite that we are wrong
No one can resist HAH! We cannot even co-exist!
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Post by henry on Mar 24, 2003 20:45:27 GMT -5
This thread makes me think of leprachauns - ignorant, naive leprachauns.
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Post by Janus on Mar 24, 2003 20:48:27 GMT -5
can someone delete this bullshit? i'm serious about my poetry
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Post by Little Miss Odd on Mar 24, 2003 20:49:53 GMT -5
is good poetry!! Henry, go shove your head in a basin of liquid Nitrogen, eh??
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Post by henry on Mar 24, 2003 20:56:29 GMT -5
I'm serious about my reaction to your poetry - it made me think of ignorant, naive leprachauns. It's...childish.
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Post by Janus on Mar 24, 2003 20:58:07 GMT -5
how is it childish??
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Post by Little Miss Odd on Mar 24, 2003 20:58:23 GMT -5
it's not so much childish, as it is.... unexperianced... i do not thikn much of the way you fitted the rhyming in... most of the poems I know with that style of format ARE those random child rhymes....
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Post by Janus on Mar 24, 2003 20:59:14 GMT -5
lesson 1:
JP is not good with rhyming
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Post by henry on Mar 24, 2003 20:59:50 GMT -5
Think more about your message, less about rhyming.
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Post by Little Miss Odd on Mar 24, 2003 21:00:20 GMT -5
think even less about Henry
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Post by henry on Mar 24, 2003 21:01:42 GMT -5
MOVE ON, LISA.
Henry-bashing is soooo last week.
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Post by Little Miss Odd on Mar 24, 2003 21:03:03 GMT -5
keep dreaming.... ego popping is NEVER out of style!!
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Post by Janus on Mar 24, 2003 21:03:07 GMT -5
hm, that was a decent comeback, but anyways thanks for the feedback
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Post by Little Miss Odd on Mar 24, 2003 21:54:23 GMT -5
which are you talking to?
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Post by flirtayangel on Mar 24, 2003 23:09:06 GMT -5
Awww, poor JP...I practically have a rhyming dictionary installed in my head!
~*~Me
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