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Post by Archagon on May 25, 2005 1:35:25 GMT -5
Ideal haikus generally have both vibrant images and insightful messages. They're hard to write.
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Post by flirtayangel on Jun 7, 2005 19:04:16 GMT -5
The waves crest and peak. Surfboarders Ride the wild tides. Gulls circle overhead. I recomend changing the last line to something like "gulls soar overhead" to fit the syllable count As a side note, I stumbled across a rather interesting comic strip the other day... The website is www.haikucircus.com Feel free to check it out. (I'll get around to posting more normal haikus at some point!!!) ~*~Me
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