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Post by bezzerkker on Jun 12, 2004 22:23:15 GMT -5
The facade's paint has peeled back. Beauty proves to be again, only skin deep No inner light, only foul corruption. Each layer scrubbed away by each trial. Delving deeper and further 'til I'm satisfied. True self revealed Decayed corpse and soul Grim fulfillment as I sigh and toss aside my doubt, my hate. Bitter grins, matched upon skull and myself. Purpose and use flee. And I collapse
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Post by geneva on Jun 14, 2004 22:52:41 GMT -5
And then wake up in the morning with a hangover?
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Post by bezzerkker on Jun 14, 2004 23:56:29 GMT -5
either that or vikadin withdrawals! withdrawals, my anti-drug
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Post by geneva on Jun 14, 2004 23:58:23 GMT -5
withdrawals, my anti-drug duh....
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Post by Arachis on Jul 5, 2004 8:59:25 GMT -5
you know its a good poem, but its impossible to take it seriously when your icon is winking at me and there is a picture of some kid eating a toad underneath....
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Post by bezzerkker on Jul 7, 2004 0:10:33 GMT -5
*gasps and nearly passes out from oxygen input over oxidizing his braincells* taking me seriously?! thats illegal in some states...
yeah, I see what you mean, but I like 'em too much to change 'em
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Post by Salome on Jul 8, 2004 15:09:56 GMT -5
*sigh* some ppl just arent willing to make sacrifices for the betterness of art
betterness.... dont ask
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Post by Archagon on Jul 8, 2004 23:22:59 GMT -5
The more goodness of art!!
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Post by bezzerkker on Jul 11, 2004 0:17:44 GMT -5
[sarcasm]or, the more betterness![/sarcasm]
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Post by Archagon on Jul 11, 2004 0:36:14 GMT -5
Hmm...if more goodness = more betterness, then the parts can be mixed, once their proportions are figured out.
More is pretty obvious with a 1:1 ratio, but goodness and betterness are a bit more complex. Let's take them on a letter to letter basis for now, which would make the ratio 8:10.
Now for the transition:
more goodness = more betterness
Multiply betterness by (8/10) and goodness by (10/8) and you get:
more betterne = more goodnessgo (because the letters have to cycle)
;D
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Post by bezzerkker on Jul 11, 2004 0:41:18 GMT -5
*eyes widen in amazement* .o0O0o. Will you teach my children?! ;D
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Post by Archagon on Jul 11, 2004 0:44:09 GMT -5
That depends. Do you have any?
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Post by bezzerkker on Jul 11, 2004 0:54:41 GMT -5
[sarcasm]Gimme about two hours, after that you have nine months to prepare material[/sarcasm]
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Post by Archagon on Jul 11, 2004 0:58:47 GMT -5
Two hours...? Nevermind, no joke here. ;D
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Post by bezzerkker on Jul 11, 2004 1:12:41 GMT -5
*overly dramatic tone* alas, the penalties of being asthmatic and extremely out of shape... not that it would happen while I'm fif-freakin'-teen, and it goes against my morals of fornication... or I could adopt
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