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Post by henry on Jul 21, 2007 4:22:02 GMT -5
i was chilling after work with my good friend coworker miki and we met a bucket drummer. he offered to write us poems on his typewriter. this is the one he wrote for me
all of us trust that we must abide by certain rules often we hide and decide to be fools seeking jewels
forgetting that the first rule is to help one another and not to harm others all of us have saphires and rubie in our hearts s pursue the highest art love
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Post by Paveltc on Jul 21, 2007 14:25:59 GMT -5
that's a cool poem man. Do you know what he wrote for miki?
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Post by Monolith on Jul 22, 2007 1:07:36 GMT -5
Not bad but the line breaks are horribly spaced. It just makes it hard to read.
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