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Apr 1, 2003 21:49:01 GMT -5
Post by GreenPathways16 on Apr 1, 2003 21:49:01 GMT -5
One upon a dreadful time Long ago and far away Many had committed crime During the darkest of all days The sun was hidden by a could All knew it was the end The moon a veiling mist did shroud Till for him they did send
A gleam of hope, a shining light Enough and more this boy sufficed With heart of strength and will of might He was endowed from paradise
With wings of glass, crystal clear Eyes deep pools of garnet red Deep gold were his tears Often they were sorrowfully shed
Because in his world he lived alone Hidden from all song and rhyme A fairy tale forgotten his life alone Once upon a different time
Here he was better than the others Above all the rest And was envied by his brothers For always being the very best
Eyes were opened wide Skin black and blue From them he couldn’t hide And he never told what he knew
Wishing he could reach his end Wanting nothing more Hoping he could find his soul to mend Lying on his bedroom floor
Pain cut at his heart Dreaming of times he could never know His mind was in another world It must have been that dream that let him go…
And he awakened In a place where he was loved He was not God forsaken! He was in paradise, the one he dreamed of
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Apr 2, 2003 17:59:58 GMT -5
Post by dietspam16 on Apr 2, 2003 17:59:58 GMT -5
shiny
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Apr 3, 2003 1:38:44 GMT -5
Post by Archagon on Apr 3, 2003 1:38:44 GMT -5
Very nice. I like the beat.
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Apr 5, 2003 0:42:14 GMT -5
Post by dietspam16 on Apr 5, 2003 0:42:14 GMT -5
i thought there was a different term for tht in poetry that i used to know and jsut forgot
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Apr 5, 2003 14:18:57 GMT -5
Post by Blues on Apr 5, 2003 14:18:57 GMT -5
I'm impressed. Go Marla!! Vote for her as Tresurer!!
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Apr 5, 2003 16:42:19 GMT -5
Post by BlueDolphin on Apr 5, 2003 16:42:19 GMT -5
Yeah! Go Marla!
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Apr 5, 2003 23:00:41 GMT -5
Post by flirtayangel on Apr 5, 2003 23:00:41 GMT -5
unfortunatly, people who would vote for marla are suddenly split between soooo many other people that are her friends! AHH!!!! I'm just having trouble picking any of them...
kenny... stephy... marley...
I had to do that marla! sorry!
;D
~*~Me
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Apr 15, 2003 16:01:15 GMT -5
Post by dietspam16 on Apr 15, 2003 16:01:15 GMT -5
wtf?
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