Chobi
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PoEm
Apr 26, 2003 0:01:50 GMT -5
Post by Chobi on Apr 26, 2003 0:01:50 GMT -5
You are there for me..
You are there, when I needed you..
You are there, when I look back..
When I feel sad,mad,happy....
You are the only one who I can laugh with..
You are the only one to understand me..
you are the only one I could trust..
you are the only friend I could belive in.....
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PoEm
Apr 26, 2003 2:20:14 GMT -5
Post by Archagon on Apr 26, 2003 2:20:14 GMT -5
I like it, but it sounds more like a song!
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PoEm
Apr 26, 2003 14:48:57 GMT -5
Post by Dr.Quack on Apr 26, 2003 14:48:57 GMT -5
That reminds me of those godforsaken "I" poems we were forced to write in Junior High School. I loathe those things with a passion!
For those of you who know Dmitry Nikitin, he got SO fed up with those poems in eighth grade, because he had already done several, that he started writing things like this:
I am Dmitry. I like killing my enemies. I wish ....etc. ... ...
He was called to the councilor's office, and they asked him if he was having any suicidal thoughts lately. He laughed.
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PoEm
Apr 26, 2003 19:40:07 GMT -5
Post by Archagon on Apr 26, 2003 19:40:07 GMT -5
LOLOLOLOL!!
My, my. Those WERE horrible times...
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PoEm
Apr 26, 2003 20:34:01 GMT -5
Post by Dr.Quack on Apr 26, 2003 20:34:01 GMT -5
Did you have to write those too?
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PoEm
Apr 26, 2003 22:08:55 GMT -5
Post by Archagon on Apr 26, 2003 22:08:55 GMT -5
OH yeah. At least 4 times through all the years the I Am ones.
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PoEm
May 4, 2003 13:28:23 GMT -5
Post by GreenPathways16 on May 4, 2003 13:28:23 GMT -5
Those "I" poems were not THAT bad, were they?
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PoEm
May 4, 2003 16:27:22 GMT -5
Post by The Silence on May 4, 2003 16:27:22 GMT -5
i really hate those poems cuz then i must find ways to define myself, which i don't enjoy doing.....
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PoEm
May 5, 2003 20:54:31 GMT -5
Post by Little Miss Odd on May 5, 2003 20:54:31 GMT -5
I.....................................
was in Hong Kong.........
instead, we got to learn about literary devices....... goddess, i hated that...
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PoEm
May 12, 2003 18:46:36 GMT -5
Post by dietspam16 on May 12, 2003 18:46:36 GMT -5
ROTFL, dmitry is awesome. at least we don't have to do those poems in english, but joys of joys, we get to do them in health! yippee! anywho, its an interesting poem, but your tenses are horrendous.
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PoEm
May 12, 2003 19:38:36 GMT -5
Post by stuffmaster on May 12, 2003 19:38:36 GMT -5
i really hate those poems cuz then i must find ways to define myself, which i don't enjoy doing..... I agree. Stuff like that's one of the reasons I don't always don't do so well in English. What's even worse is when they force you to share stuff like that in class. Anyway, nice poem, good use of repetititititition
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