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Post by Nature's Fury on Sept 20, 2003 0:04:43 GMT -5
Who but you? Who but you can turn fire and flood, can warm those too cold and cool those too warm? Who but you?
Who but you can turn ashes to gold, can defend the defenseless and can caution the bold? Who but you can stop the sun in the sky, who else can make tears fade when I cry?
Who else should I turn to in moments of pain, who else can make sadness and bitterness wain? Who else can I trust with my happiest dreams? Who else do I go to when life’s not what it seems?
Who but you can gather stars for me? Who but you can set word and spirit free? To whom shall I run when the world brings me down? With whom shall I laugh as we’re acting the clown?
To whom will I whisper my fears and my doubts? And with who shall I discuss the ins and the outs? Where shall I turn for help and for comfort? And where shall I go with a lesson of import?
Who but you can I trust with my heart Who but you can give me such a wonderous start? Who but you can I love for forever, my dear? Who but you, for whom I’ve shed many a tear?
Who else shall I love if you turn me away? Why should I live past another cruel day? Where should I go, if not to your arms? Where I’ve always been safe from life’s bitter harms?
Who but you, my dear, should I seek when my heart is in tatters and my knees have gone weak? Who but you, when I’m older and wiser and grown? Only you... and you've left me alone.
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Post by Nature's Fury on Sept 20, 2003 0:05:20 GMT -5
If you all start to get sick of these, please let me know and I'll put them somewhere else.
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Post by BlueDolphin on Sept 20, 2003 0:19:18 GMT -5
It is okay. After all this is the poetry board.
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Post by Archagon on Sept 20, 2003 2:04:21 GMT -5
Nono, keep posting!
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Post by Nature's Fury on Sept 21, 2003 1:11:20 GMT -5
*smiles slightly* Thanks for the encouragement, guys... It means a lot.
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Post by Salome on Sept 21, 2003 13:35:14 GMT -5
by all means, keep posting them... that was really REALLY good
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Post by AZERTY on Sept 21, 2003 21:10:52 GMT -5
This poem is VERY good... It is written as well as the other one, only this time it has rhyme!!!!! This poem is great!
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Post by Archagon on Sept 21, 2003 21:13:48 GMT -5
Okay, I've read it.
Splendid! I predicted the ending, but was it my poem I would have given it two lines, not one.
Once again, very nice foray into the raindrops of one human emotion.
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