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Post by bezzerkker on Mar 17, 2004 18:27:55 GMT -5
in my mind, I run away with you at my side in my mind, I seek a safe place to hide to escape all these events and mistakes where everyone is truth- ful, no deciet and fakes I turn the lights out to forget it all Blow out the flame, hit the switch, begin my fall avoiding the glances of the moon and stars pushing back all the bleeding scars both caused by trust betrayed in intent marring what I knew was sky-sent blankets of apathy sources of self-control no ladder or stream in my masochist hole
edit: forgot a line >.<
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Post by Antid on Mar 17, 2004 21:09:38 GMT -5
Very interesting.
Did you write that?
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Post by Haku on Mar 17, 2004 22:04:32 GMT -5
cool...sounds sad though. what inspired it?
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Post by Archagon on Mar 17, 2004 23:46:45 GMT -5
Very good, I like it!
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Post by bezzerkker on Mar 19, 2004 20:01:52 GMT -5
yes, its something I wrote. What inspired was partially the song "Echoes" by Trapt and my reaction when I was just laying around in my room and I remembered the many moments when I did something shockingly wrong and/or stupid among something else that I've sworn myself to secrecy about I literally turned out the lights, blew out my candle, and cranked up my music and then of course, I wrote the poem ^^''
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