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Post by A Shy Cat on Jul 19, 2004 20:19:52 GMT -5
Crucify Yourself
so this was all a game to you? well f*ck you and all your lies! didn't think I'd find your words? they're branded into my brain. to think i said "I'll be ok" and "maybe someday" but now I know the truth, it's come out no need to hide. I'm no cross, never have been. Crucify yourself, I'm no longer blinded and trapt, by your fruitless lies. Don't try to say, "I didn't mean it" You ended your "sin" I am not giving in, A fallen Angel am I, and not too forgiving. the world is grey, not black and white. go run to God, and - Crucify Yourself
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Post by bezzerkker on Jul 19, 2004 22:31:10 GMT -5
Nice poem, impacting with its raw emotion and such. After the first four lines, the rhythm and meter or whatever sorta breaks and changes, disrupting the flow a bit. Then again, that could just be me.
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